Nice
Not bad...the animation was alright. I would have liked to scene your character colored in, but its not a big deal. I especially liked the penguin. The voice you were using however kind of got annoying after a bit. Not your fault, but I've heard it on characters like a million other times so yeah.
Yeah, I had considered coloring him, but by the time that epiphany hit me I was already like 50 keyframes in and didn't really feel like it, so I gave it a "drawn on piece of paper" look. After watching this countless times to check for bugs... I was about to rip out my vocal cords myself haha. Thanks again.
Wow
For a first flash project, this is fantastic...you could have submitted this without saying that this is your first and I don't think many people would have even thought that. There were a couple minor things I did not like, but let me start with the good first.
The animation was pretty good and was definitely fluid. Through the movement and animation alone I could tell you probably put a lot of work into this. The dream sequences you came up with were also very cool. I especially liked the growth sequence. And props on the music. Each song fit each segment perfectly. However, this will lead me on to one thing that bothered me; during the pain sequence the loop you used was a bit choppy. It was still a great song for the sequence, but its choppiness kind of broke it up so the sequence wasn't as powerful as the other two.
One more question...why give the kid two different color eyes? I'm not saying its bad, I'm just curious.
Anyway great submission.
10/10
5/5
For some reason I couldn't get the music to flow throughout consistently. It's my least favorite sequence too.
Awesome
I really enjoyed this visually as well as the story...I'd like to see you delve more into this
Thank you, Hopefully my next movies will be more along these lines...
who doesn't love kirby?
does this mean you are working on a kirby flash game? that would be cool
Perhaps I'll make a Kirby Flash Game...
haha...
I love how the dude sees him right at the end before he gets shot...do more bro I liked this...but make your next longer please!
Its really hard to make them long. Im making a birds eye WH40K flash and ill post up a teaser soon enuf to show u what its like
im sorry but...
total shit...
I'm sorry kid but, the comedy was immature, the animation was lacking to say the least, the voice acting was terrible(except for the old man), and what the hell is up with him falling through a window and then suddenly off a cliff that had no apparent buildings on it...last time I checked cliffs just didnt have windows just sitting around on them
Thanks!
lol
U get a ten simple because the song is the MIDI version of chocolate rain.
It's actually the N.E.S. music, but why do you give it a 10 because of the music anyway...
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