ok...
my one suggestion would be to turn up the levels some...especially the drums...and the piano line was a bit repetitive. The pads were good though, but sometimes they dropped out and I felt they should have stayed in. Keep it up though, still a decent song, especially like the intro.
Sorry bout volumes i use freeware and it limits the volumes. Its all maxed out :(
Pretty song
not much variation though...but still def an enjoyable song to listen to.
4/5
8/10
thanks!
eh...
sorry bro...maybe for me I guess this song just wasn't doing it. It was way to repetitive and while you had a nice drum track it didn't sync to the rest of the effects very well especially in the beginning.
It was late at night when I made this, couldn't stand doing to much to this song... I didn't want to start again and iv'e been busy as hell. I just had to make it as long as possible and just get it over with... But i hope to make much better stuff later! :)
Not bad, not bad at all
Had a real reminiscent 80's feel to it which I liked...I don't know if I would consider this ambient, but thats probably the closest description to it so whatev. A nice filter on the drums too, but the drums get over powered to the point where I can barely hear them once the lead comes in so may want to either crank up some levels or work on your mastering. I like the main synth line, but it gets pretty repetitive as it travels through the whole song. One more thing, I like the idea of throwing the yells in as this song is called tribal yell but consider the placement of them, a couple seemed pretty random and the one at 1:27 felt unnecessarily long, it was just kinda distracting from the rest of the song because of how long it was.
Overall its a good solid work that could use a bit of tuning up though.
3/5
7/10
Thanks alot for the review, the drums are actually supposed to get over run, thats how I wrote that part. I do realize that alot of the mixing is a bit off, thats my biggest weakness when it comes to making music though, so its something im going to have to learn to fix. As for the yell at 1:27, thats more of a battle yell, like an ancient army running to the fight, then after that there is the calm before the storm. Thanks again for the review, ill work on it :)
Nice
I gotta say, the title really says it all here. Feels like you're in a calm field with a bunch of butterflies or could even relate to the way someone gets butterflies when someone sees the person he or she loves.
Awesome overall, very relaxing and heartwarming.
Thanks for the review :)
Nice
I feel you bro I'm just starting to get the hang of FL but yeah checked out the other version, I wouldn't say it was bad but definitely a major improvement on smoothing out the synths and making the drums much better. Keep up the good work!
Wow...really nice song
Loved the warm pads and DnB style drums over it...it's surreal sounding almost!
I can see why Darthfett feels why the transition at 2:30ish is a little odd...to me it just sounded as if the song was going to end there because everything drops out for a couple seconds...don't get me wrong its not bad and its all up to you as the author as this is your creative piece of work which I thoroughly enjoyed. Anyway im giving this a 5/5 and a 10 so great job and keep up the unique tracks
Thank you, I appreciate the input.
I guess that was meant more as a transition but the layering was so minimal that it just didn't work as i had hoped. Perhaps that's just a lesson for me to take into account in the future.
Anyhow, thank you for the input.
Awesome
Really good job with the synths and the drums. The violins felt a little to powerful though...absolutely loved the lead that came in around 1:18
Great job overall!
5/5
9/10
Thanks Very much!!!
Great!
Yeah all I have to say is a little delay, or reverb, or even an ambiance pad would really emphasize the emotion but otherwise I really like this
good job
4/5
8/10
I will try something in the final... Thanks for the review!
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