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Hmmm...

I want to like this song. I love the drums and the synths, keys, and sound effects you used, however, they all seems too disharmonic from one another. And I can tell the song is supposed to be disharmonic, but a good sounding disharmony comes from carefully crafting it out of scales. The disharmonies here just seem way to far apart. I would like to here something major playing under that diminished sounding riff with an accompanying disharmony, as in a scale that is one half step up or down. Anyway, I still think it is a cool ambient, creepy jam.
So...
7/10
4/5

My take

Liked the drums and I like the style you have going here, however, I can't say I really liked the main melody. It wasn't the progression, I think it was the synth used for it. It sounded a bit to weaksauce for the drums. And is that clipping I hear in the background, cus if it is it's quite a bit through the whole song. Though perhaps you did that on purpose to give it a dirty feel. I dunno. Anyway like I said the main synth was weak, but the drums were fantastic and because this style is all about the drums I give it an 8/10 and 4/5.

JumpstylezBeatz responds:

well thanks im working on a new piece right now. so hopefully it will turn out ok. Thanks for your thoughts. im glad you liked some of it XD

I concure...

Fucking amazing song bro...unbelievable! My only issue with this song is that it is short. I beg you to make it longer and blow our minds, like a fucking mind grenade.

Pretty nifty bro...

I can see where you got your inspiration from the matrix from, but I this also reminds me of something I would hear in the Halo series, while aboard an enemy ship maybe. This also reminds me a lot of some of the tracks on the NIN nails album, Ghosts. But overall, this is a groovy and original song. Props bro.
10/10
5/5

JohnnyFrizz responds:

Hey! Thanks again man, yes my work is also very influenced by the Halo Series soundtracks, I havent heard that one from Nine Inch Nails though.

Once again, tyvm!

cool beans

I could definitely hear this turning into something awesome. As of now, it's a tad boring because it is pretty repetitive. However, excellent job with the mixing and layering. Everything sounds perfect in that respect. As for a loop, I could definitely see this working in a game. I really hope you take off with this song after this part (i'm guessing its the intro?). Let me know when you finish this, I would like to see where it goes.
9/10
5/5

JohnnyFrizz responds:

Alright! I'll PM ya when the final product is finished, but I might still update this file so remember to come back after a while.

Thank you very much for the review!

Oh I like this

My only suggestion would be make the drums a little more subtle. Don't just follow a straight forward beat. I think it may make for a much more ambient feel if you limit the amount of the kick you use here. Love the hi hat however and the melody is fantastic.
8/10
4/5

Andreonh responds:

Thanks! I tried making the drums a little more subtle and it worked a little. This is just me getting used to using FL Studio 8 XXL edition. I am still working on my basslines. Thanks for the review and the score it was really helpful.

~Andreonh

what's that solo thingy?

deathcore really doesn't have solo's. other than that I have to agree that the crash used there really takes away from the song. It's not layered in properly and just sounds like its lying on top of the song. Def have a bad ass breakdown going on there however.

aveus128 responds:

lol yeah i know, eh progressive deathcore bands use a lot of solos, im pretty shitty at it haha

Hmm.

Something about the transition from the nice ambient part to the hardstyle part seemed off to me. I mean it was on beat and all, but it felt as if it didn't flow properly. Very nice melodies though, I especially loved the one that comes in right off the bat, you could build a real big, inspirational sounding song off of that alone.

Lanni responds:

Yea, im not good with transitions :(
Thanks for rating and feedback :).

Pretty sick

Pretty sick song my friend. The intro had me hooked right off the bat. My only complaint with this is the hard distorted kick. Something about it I didn't like...maybe it was just a little too much. But overall this is a fun song!
9/10
5/5

KingKilo responds:

Thanks allot man! I do love my distortion. I'll see if I can tone it down a bit next time.
Cheers!

- KKB

Nice

I feel like I'm in a Panera now!

dude23 responds:

I hope you feel like that all day.

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